snouty
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a story with a twist at the endthis guy, right, he did this thing and then someone came in; he was in a place, and someone came in, and a voice said, 'no!'
and then the man went to the airport and he bought a plane to somewhere; somewhere mysterious, somewhere exotic, somewhere dreamy...
Devon. and as he flew thru the clouds so gracefully, suddenly a carp went mental and destroyed the universe the end.
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Ninjadmin
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i want my money back 
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snouty
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were you expecting that ending, ninj? sorry, I know it's a cliche endin, but carp you see the funny side?
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Ninjadmin
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just more character development 
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snouty
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don't you like it when the voice says, 'no!'? Isn't that enough for you? Jeffrey Archer went to prison for less than that!
I mean, that guy who sez, 'no!' he's a character, there's no doubt about it! I might bring him back in my next epic... yeah, "the man who said, 'no!'" 'citin'!
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Ninjadmin
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it's not exactly war and peace :P
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snouty
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from such humble chestnuts, mighty oaks may grow. I am going to patent his character... If anyone else reads this, they could steal my idea... I mean, imagine if J K Rowling saw it, and based a whole series of books about the mysterious nay-sayer... where did he come from, where did he go, where... oh I think I've had enough of this!
'no!'
and you can eff off an all!
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hiccup
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Saw it coming a mile off
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snouty
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the carp of doom?
It's a feckin hollywood staple :frowny face:
If I had to count the number of episodes of 'friends' that end with an insane fish destroying the universe...
'the one where the trout makes the world explode'
'the one where the halibut prevents the big bang'
and so on... 
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