Narrativo

Ninjadmin · Narrativo

i found some old notebooks from a few years ago so i'll put a couple of stories up

#1 Narrativo

And I'm trying to get to the bar, and everyone is pushing everyone I can feel all these sweaty bastards pressing against me, with their horrible clothes and breath. It's a fight just to stay up, listening to all these idiots talking shit to their idiot gorilfriends. I just know I disagree with what they are saying from their tone of voice.. am getting elbows from these pricks who think they're gonna get there quicker. JUST FUCKING WAIT!! so one guy keeps treading on my heels and talking over my head, I give him a nice polite shove, "please don't be such a dick" but he takes this as a chance to shove me back. treads on my heels double, so i turn around and give him my worst look
"can yo get off my fucking feet please?"
I know this will provoke him, which is sort of why i do it, am already pissed, I always bring a plastic bottle full of vodka with me. I only want more drinks to make myself drink faster
anyway, his whole entourage start joining in, I'm grinning like an idiot, these inconsequential pricks who can't even say inconsequential, calling me everything, and me just loving the attention
One girl, there's always one, her voice, how she looks, jumped up to fuck, sets off that little demon inside. I can feel him in my chest, mixing the alcohol and frustration into a cocktail and kicking fuck out of the angel. this girl keeps getting louder and louder the calmer and calmer i become on the outside
then i start grinning. at first an arrogant smirk, then a full on "nenehnehnehNEHNEHNEH!!!!! oyur gonna die!!!!" and she's getting worse and worse, they're all having a go, then i turn full onto her, looking into her soul. and she shuts up, I can see this radge bitch has just looked back and seen how empty this prick is
a moment of tranquility, voices fade, here we are, just me and her, she has time to think about what she did wrong and how she ended up here. i just let the monster go out of me into her eyes
The best thing, just for a second, is that 'seen it all' bitch remembers being the sweet little girl who screamed and noone heard.
I jump on her and take a bite of her nose, the sweet taste of blood, skin, stale sweat, I just gnaw away and am surprised how easy it is to bite off a nose
I've got her whole noggin in my mouth, seperate from my face. bouncers drag me off and start punching and kicking me, and i almost swallow the whole thing. I manage to look into her dazed eyes, she is totally herself, not the arrogant twat she was, and she looks back with horror into the eyes of an idiot, nothing but pleasure and anger. I spit a lump of her flesh at her as the boys drag me outside for a kicking before the police arrive, the whole pub is now silent, and her blood is running down my face

The police never come, I get beaten to fuck. I won't feel it if I stay inside and off my face for a week.
Nobody won, but then again nobody lost. The girl lost her not very good looks, the pub lost some customers, I had nothing to lose

man I must have been in a bad mood when i wrote that

J

fuck me ninj, bit mad and all.
still cool though even though i know fuck all bout riteing

that lass had it coming

Ninjadmin

it's pretty horrible, but quite well written i hope

J